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Love the tails effects
I have a few suggestion if you'll have them
-First, the woman and the fox look great together, but the woman doesnt really have matching shadows to the backgorund. The woman's skin seems unusually bright and vibrant (although this might be the maigcal-aspect of her). Assuming it isn't, if you could reduce the Saturation of her skin a bit, and then paint in a few soft shadows, particularly under her arms and hair, I think it would really help connect her with the scene.
-Second, shadows. There isn't really a defined light source in the background (I would assume the light is coming from the right-side), but both the fox and the woman should have soft shadows around them, away from the bright light to their left.
-Lastly, the edges of the fox look a little flat - if you could take the Smudge tool and lightly (and carefully) add some clean up the edge so it looks more fur-like, I think it would really help the make the fox look good
Otherwise I think this is great!
I do apologize if I sounded harsh or offending anywhere in my critique, it was not intended to offend
Cheers!
Dan
I have to agree with you that she does look bright and awkward in it but I didn't know how to fix it and blend it with the background. Thanks for your suggestion and honest critique!
This will definitely help me next time.
If you ever have anything else you want critiqued I'm here